Building a Tower of Blocks
Now, let me ask you a question: when a young child (or you, if you are still secretly in that category!) builds a tower of blocks, what do they plan to do? Usually the answer would be one of the following two answers; either a.) to knock it all down with a big crash, or b.) to build a masterpiece to show to others. With writing a play, that is exactly what you should be doing! You are writing, building up to your climax. Whether that climax is a loud, crashing disaster or a lofty, lovely tower depends on your storyline. But you need something between the introductions and the climax to make a story (or play). So here are some hints!
You need to put meat on the bones of your story. Read the lines aloud. Does it sound awkward, or unnatural? You may want to rethink that scene! Pretend that you are watching your play. Would the last scene make any sense to someone who is not the writer (which, if your play is performed, will be a LARGE majority! Think about it, friend!)?
In a story, you can write down the feelings and emotions of the character, but in a play you must show everything to the audience. No getting inside of the character's mind! But...could you're main character be thinking aloud? Can they be talking to a pet or something like a journal about their feelings and though processes?
Do not be afraid of taking out any scenes that you are now realizing are unnecessary or impossible to write! Any important information in those scenes might be able to be sneaked into other scenes! Believe me, I have done this a lot!
A scene can consist of just a paragraph or two. It could even be just one or two sentences! Just think of the backstage people who will have to set up for each scene. Is all the work of this scene worth what it represents?
Use the stage! There is this really handy line that says "The whole world is a stage", and I might add, "So use it!!!!!!!" Exit and enter off of different sides of the stage. Remember to be specifying this in your play! And the centre aisles can be used. Actors can move through the audience in some scenes. I love my carolling scenes like that! They give an unexpected and surprising twist, plus are a friendly time to spot your family and friends in the audience!
Well, those are some tips! As you write, you will develop more ideas and your own personal style! Share your tips in the comments!
God bless, and see you later this week! I will be trying to post a schedule for this week tonight, so stick around!
Indi Raine
Phil. 4:4